
On the porch, she sat
Alone,
as the sun shone upon her
a regal glow.
Her yellow dress flowed with ease
as it radiated shame and doubts upon
my oversized shirt and
lingered on the space
around
the insides of
my baggy pants.
I held out my
Hand
and waited for
the touch
that held on through
bright skies and ice creams and
days playing with
puddles of mud.
Until our feet became soddened with
dirt and water
and our hands,
wrinkled with soap suds and
still waters,
as we try to wash in vain
the stain of our
childhood
bliss.
And on the porch
we watch the
years roll by
and try to fold in the
letters and the
miles that set us
apart
and remember
the rotting wooden clothespins
that secures in place
the hues of
yellow and blue,
of the days
when we watch over
them fluttering along with
the wind that
blows
hard
and hanging on as
the rain
falls
down.
Tags: maureen, narrative poem, poetry, the clothesline



the “stain of our childhood bliss” — hmm, mysterious! You could reconsider the line cutting here so that the poem might look more horizontal — like a clothesline?
And review the tenses.