
When I was younger,
Papa used to buy me my favorite
balloon.
A red one.
I saw him smile at me
and taught me how to handle it
without losing hold on it.
He said that I should hold it
tightly with my little bare hands.
But I don’t know how to control
that’s why he tied the string
and knotted it accordingly
to my right thumb without
hurting my finger.
He was so patient.
Now, I’m already a grown up
Papa don’t want me
to act as a child anymore.
He don’t want to see
me holding a balloon anymore.
He’s angry
whenever I buy one.
And says I become more immature.
He said I should not hold the balloon
tighter for I learn to let go
of things.
That I
should learn going up high
freely and independently.
I still love the balloon
but he told me to let it go.
Does he don’t love me anymore?
But he said that changes
should partake to make things grow.
And I believe he still love me
because he wants me to grow
without losing the grip
of the string inside his heart.
Tags: a helium inside papa's balloon, balloon, diana, helium, narrative poem, poetry



The central image is lovely, but the poem has so many grammatical problems, including in the title. Try shorter forms.
Great poem, well done