I hate them
so I killed them…

four burdens.
Three sons who took my money
repaying me with incest
love for their sister.
I’m tired of being
a mother
a wife.
The shame, the guilt
for my offspring’s fault
passed to me,
the mother,
the carrier of the rotten fruits.
Have they forgotten
My husband’s seed,
where the flaw usually came from?
I’m tired of being a woman;
so I quitted
The despised role,
Ending it
with my children’s death,
a poison on their food.
My ungrateful boys,
my lascivious girl,
on the dining area sat
pale as ashes, cold as ice.
And my husband, I put
a mark on his name—
SHAME.
And killed his pride.
Regrets are nothing to me now.
I am too kind for a murderer,
I am a cannibal.
Their death tokens
(clam shell, betel nut, buyo leaf, tobacco)
my mouth chews
every morning, every afternoon.
I spit them
As passionately as my contempt
for my children’s misbehavior.
If this passion leads me to hell
and live with Satan,
then I’ll chew mama with him.
Tags: kring, mother of crimes, mythopoem, poetry



The voice of the persona is very distinct. But you are still getting in her way because you seem to be judgmental of her. For example, in the last lines, you seem to want her to go to hell. You can still tighten language throughout the poem. Sustain her lack of remorse because that’s what makes this poem powerful as a woman’s text.